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Post by bugg on Sept 27, 2008 12:08:46 GMT -5
Name ;;Moonlight on the Horizon Nickname ;;Moon Age ;; 1 and a half Gender ;;female Breed ;;Whippet Appearance ;; She is grey, with white 'socks' and a white star on her chest History ;; She was born in a puppy mill and was taken away from her mother soon after she was born. She was taken to a large house, where she was bought by a small family. She was well taken care of, but the family had to move away, and they left her at a scary pound. She is currently on the list to be put down. This is where Emily will come in. Role Play Sample ;;Moon's paws slid across the floor as one of the volunteers at the shelter pulled her along the corridor towards one of the small pens where a family waited to see her. She whined as the volunteer opened the door and handed the child the leash."I don't know..," the man said as he looked at Moon,"She's too small," the child complained as he handed the woman the leash back." She's a good dog." the volunteer said, trying to get them to adopt Moon. They weren't convinced," Let us see that dog over there."they said, motioning towards a nice and clean Saint Bernard. Moon was pulled away, yet again, from another family and into her small cage.
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Post by FalconX on Sept 27, 2008 12:12:16 GMT -5
Please lengthen the RP sample ^^ All IC RP posts must be 150+ words. Your RP sample is only 124 words. Once you lengthen it, I'll accept <3
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Post by bugg on Sept 27, 2008 12:23:41 GMT -5
* Oh sorry, forgot to count the words, anyway here you go:*
Moon's paws slid across the floor as one of the volunteers at the shelter pulled her along the corridor towards one of the small pens where a family waited to see her. She whined as the volunteer opened the door and handed the child the leash."I don't know..," the man said as he looked at Moon,"She's too small," the child complained as he handed the woman the leash back." She's a good dog." the volunteer said, trying to get them to adopt Moon. They weren't convinced," Let us see that dog over there."they said, motioning towards a nice and clean Saint Bernard. Moon was pulled away, yet again, from another family and into her small cage.
Once in her cage, she skittered to the back of it, and whimpered sadly. The family from before passed her, with the Saint Bernard happily followed. "Figures," Moon said, knowing they couldn't understand her. Moon wasn't really a bad dog, she was just tired of nobody wanting her, and she yet again began to remember her old family.
Is that alright?
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Post by FalconX on Sept 27, 2008 12:34:41 GMT -5
a c c e p t e d Have fun!
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