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Post by .:Desired♥:. on Sept 28, 2008 14:21:45 GMT -5
Breed:Doberman Pitbull Cross Age: Around Four Years Info:Admiral, as he have decided to call him is wild and vicious. He will need a firm yet kind and patient hand. He was apparently born free and wild and so he has wild dgo tendencies. He will be a one person dog and CAN'T have any other dogs. Needs a large yard, preferably with wooden fences, so he won't hurt other dogs. He apparently doesn't like normal dog food, so slowly condition him to it. He ay also need a muzzle in public, good luck trying to own him!
The world was loud and filled with the hot breath of breathing dogs, and the only sound they made was soft whimpering or the occsional clack of moving paws. Many seemed to have given up from somewhere in the metal cage and their voices were weak and the only noise they did make was one of the broken and soulless. There was one large bellow though, louder than normal and echoing off the concrete walls, from deep in the big dogs area. Their was a note of anger and desperation to the note of the bellow and the sound of something thrown against the cage door rattled throughout the room.
Admiral shook himself, mouth open wide snarling, as his powerful and underfed Doberman and Pitbull body again lunged towards the only entrance he could see, and he snarled a roar as he was again pushed back onto the cement floor. A single paper flutted on the metal door, bright red letters screaming, DANGEROUS ANIMAL EXPERIENCED OWNERS ONLY. He snarled large black and tan chest rising and falling as he caught his breath. He lunged forward and his strong yellowed teeth slammed down on the metal loops that somehow held him in, while large paws scraped upon them as well. He gritted harder, as the mrtal cut into his large pink tongue, sending the taste of red blood down his throat. His paws as well sliced as they moved up and down, the pads become more beat up every movement. He snarled again, letting lose an angry howl and laucnhed himself sideways, trying to get out. He yelped slightly as it threw him back. He landed hard on the concrete floor, skeletal body knocking over the untouched dog bowl. Blood pawprints smeared as he lay down, sides heaving with breath, blood lolling out of his mouth.
This cage shuldn't be able to hold him, and it aggeavated him. He was a free dog, supposed to be unbound by the laws of nature. He breathed in, strange defetced tellow eyes clearly showing the fire that welled behind them. He scanned the cage, looking for anything to come and let him have his chance to be free again. He jumped up again, bristling and snarling barking at the door, as he heard the sound of feet on the boardwalk. Someone was here and they were close. He snarled angrily as he heard dogs whimpering pleadingly. What was with them he was ready to break through it, knowing that the door to the outside had been opened for the briefest second. He jumped again, blood on the floor smeared yet again as he bit through the cage door again, yellow eyes flashing.
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Post by mav on Oct 4, 2008 22:09:05 GMT -5
"Hi"I say cheerly as I smile,"Whats the mater?"I slide a dog treat in the cage."I know its OK."My eyes soften for the dog."Shhh..."I Whisper as I watch him.I nod my head as if i liked him.I call over a worker and asks her,"Is this dog up for adoption?"She says "Yes but hes too mean to be adopted."She starts to lead me to the puppies but I don't move from beside him.I say through gritted teeth"I want this dog."She tries to say no but I cut her off"Where do I sign?"She walks to the front desk to get a clip board for me .I kneel down to talk to my new companion"Hear that? No more cages,pound,or cruelty.Ill make sure your loved for life." When the lady comes back she gives me a leash,a muzzle,and a collar for Admiral.I whisper to him"Lets go home"
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Post by .:Desired♥:. on Oct 6, 2008 16:52:26 GMT -5
His sides heaved from the effort of his useless escapes. He raised though, as he heard the voice of a young girl. A growl came from deep within his chest. She appeared and he lunged forward, opposite of what a normal dog would do. But this girl had kept her position right where he couln't reach her. Strange yellow eyes watched as she exchanged their weird jargon with another female human. He barked at this one, she had been rude to him and she would regret it later. A constant growl muttered under his hot breath, as they both walked away.
He breathed in, wondering what all that was about, but gave up as his stomach growled with the smell of something falsely scented. He whipped around and saw the dog treat there. Large nose bent down and snuffled at it. He reared back and snorted, the disgusting human stuff. Stomach gurgled loudly as he thought of the taste of pigeon in his maw.
But that thought was pushed away as the human appeared again, he reconginzed her. She had thick brown hair that matched her eyes, which stared back at him. He growled, his own challenging her to a contest. But the door opened and he barreled through, probably knocking the girl over. But apparently the other one had been expecting that and stepped in his way.
He reared as they put that stupid leather rope around his neck. It passed into the hand's of the brown-haired girl. He watched as the blonde worker spoke, though he didn't understand most of it. "Are you sure you want him? We also have a muzzle for him if you don't have one. Court mandated he have one in public." He tugged on the leash, testing the new girl's strength, and he lunged at the dog that had been in front of his cage, the one that had taunted him would now get it. A bark erupted from his maw and he went after the dog who cowered behind hus metal cage.
ooc: Thanks for replying. Hope you don't mind constant posting, he's terrible.
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Post by mav on Oct 7, 2008 15:57:17 GMT -5
I tug on the leash harder firmly"I like him.Hes not afraid to express himself not afraid of what others think,"I say,"Hes like me."I Pull my new companion back from the other dog quickly.I start to pat the young Doberman Pit bull Cross lovingly.I look at Admiral my dark brown eyes cutting into his."There are no bad dogs,"I tell the Blondie worker"There are only bad owners who train the dogs to be bad."My eyes soften."Besides,I already like him and you respect that,got it?"My brown hair shines in the pale light brightly.I think to myself I won't give up.My eyes have an strange sparkle in them.The Blondie worker Says "But hes only a worthless mutt!"I growl at her"All dogs are worth something the breed doesn't matter.In my eyes all dogs are perfect even him."
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Post by .:Desired♥:. on Oct 7, 2008 18:21:21 GMT -5
He was sure he was close enough to scare the dog to death, but the firm pull on his leash had him stopping inches from the metal cage. He snarled and coughed, choking himself on the taunt leash. He growled and walked back, yellow eyes prowling around. The muzzle on his mouth was uncomfortable, and he tried to shake it off.
He growled at the Blonde human's tone, it had an odd rather rude tune to it and it made him what to bite her for it. But as it were, the brown-eyed girl was staring deep into his eyes. He rumbled under his breath, like a train. When she didn't look away he lunged, the muzzle most likely smacking hard on her arm. He snarled again and tried to pull free, but it wouldn't come off and tugged harder, before he ended up flopping on his back.
Blondie spoke again, "All right, but I'm warning you he is labeled dangerous by the county. You have to follow strcit ruesl." She gave her a sheet and huffed turning around and leaving.
On the hseet were various rules which applied to him.
1. In public, Admiral must wear a muzzle. A choke chain collor is optional, but suggested. He must also have a chain or thick leather leash.
2. He must always have a collar on with a license stating he is a dangerous dog and where you live.
3. Collar mustbe red, stating that he is dangerous.
4. Is not allowed off-leash even at dog parks.
5. Must participate in some kind of obedeince program.
6 IF HE BITES OR ATTACKS SOMEONE HE MUST BE IMMEDIATELY HUMANELY EUTHANIZED. He may be allowed a court trail to find it if the attack was provoked.
He snarled again, lunging towards the door that the Blonde worker had gone through, he seriously wanted out of here and was slowly crawling that way, choking himself in the process. A deep hacking noise came from him, but he didn't care.
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Post by mav on Oct 11, 2008 11:53:41 GMT -5
I nod my head at all of them even the training and i say"That will be easy Im a dog trainer in spare time,I have dealed with more dogs in this place"As I say place I think stink hole."Admiral is not the worst one I saw.One dog sent me to the hospitil but a year later he became a seeing eye dog.Admiral may seem mean but i can see his future and it looks bright in my eyes mabey not to you but it is to me."My voice was almost cheery but a sharp tone cut in.I leap out of the way of the ufd (unidiified flying dog)my speed impresing I stand up lokking huge to Admiral as i look down at him.I can tell his muzzle was painful so I reach for my purse pulliing a bright red one out the smell of a American Pitbull smell on it while fighting.I hold it up to Admiral letting him see it the dogs smell all over it.The plastic had a tough but soft metal on it.The smell wafted up into Admiral nose reminding him of some thing but he cant remember what, strange.He knows its a dog but cant tell who.
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Post by .:Desired♥:. on Oct 12, 2008 15:53:44 GMT -5
um....in your post you are pwoerplaying. You can't make Admiral smeel something that he cant remember.
Also I don't understand what you mean by" pulling a bright red one out the smell of a American Pit Bull on it while fighting. " I don't get the fighting bit.
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